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Naa hashi rash aai humee, naa dard sath raha
Yeh ziNdagi toh bas mere liye ek khawab raha
Naa mukammal ghazal likh sake, naa bayaN
Kuch raha toh bas mere sath chuna alfaaz raha
Kaha, kise kahe ? ki kya gam humko das raha..
yaha toh sara jahaN hii gam-e-dard me roo raha
Har harf-harf hoo jaise shole ki manind jal raha
judai ka har pal hai kehar ban aaj barash raha
Yeh kaisi ajeeb justzoo se huye hai aaj rubaroo
Ki aaj mera har kahwab hii hai mujhe chubh raha
aa dekh tu khuda ! bande ko tune yeh kya diya
Aaj fir tadap mili diL ko, aaj fir hai OMi roo raha
Meri Apni Qalm se –> OMi
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{ 11 comments… read them below or add one }
इतना अच्छा लिखा है ओमी जी की मुझे लिखने पे मजबूर कर दिया!
तेरे हाल में मुझे अपनी तस्वीर नज़र आ रही है
तूने कहे दिया हाल-ए-दिल अपनी ज़बान लड़खड़ा रही है
क्या कहूँ दास्तान बेवफ़ाई की उनकी, अश्क यह थमते नही
वो पास नही लकिन तक उनकी मोहब्बर बुला रही है
Wow!! Omi ji
Very nice shayari/gazal. you touched my heart.
Apaka bahut bahut sukriya janab..
Kya baat hai ravi ji.. dil ki batoN ko jabaN
me laa rahe hai.. bahut badiya..
Dua karte hai.. jiski mohabbat bula rahi hai..woh khud hi aa jaye..
yeh chnad sher aapke naaM..
phans ik dil main phansi ho to ghazal hoti hai
aag sene main laggi ho to ghazal hoti hai
shabe tanhai guzar jaye to subha subha
zindgi ghum main dhali ho to ghazal hoti hai
hahaha.. thx anita ji..
its really nice to heard that.. ma words touched ur heart..
soo keep coming and supporting me..:)
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Sab the hairat ek ajabsa aadmi dekhkar
Khush jo hota tha sabki khushi dekhkar
jo dur raha hamesha duniya ki chaka chaundh se
aaj mar mita us par bhi koi sadgi dekhkar..
Nice one Dear!! Like it … Zindgi ek ka ek harpal ‘gazal’ hoti hai
Nice one Omi!! Main shayar to nahi … magar e-hasin .. jabse dekha … maine tujhko … mujhko… shayari aagai
Ji ek dam sahi kaha aapne anita ji..
lolzz
agar sahi tarike se dekha jaye to har chhez par ghazal hoti hai.. bt likhane wala bhi to hone chaiye..
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lolzzz..thx man sandy… at least tumhe shayari to aa gayi…
wah janab bohot khub
janab wah-wah bohot khub
omi ji aap bahut hi achha likhte hai maine aapki bahut saari kavita padhi hain/
hi………………