Comments on: Teri bewafai http://www.toshakishayari.com/teri-bewafai World of Original Shayari & Poetry Mon, 21 Jun 2010 01:39:00 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.9.2 hourly 1 By: ABHEY KUMAR http://www.toshakishayari.com/teri-bewafai/comment-page-1#comment-1100 ABHEY KUMAR Fri, 23 Oct 2009 11:00:38 +0000 http://www.toshakishayari.com/?p=817#comment-1100 can i join the tosha sayri .com because i am writter to please gave me answered. you learn it ill and well ,rain and shine must read the tosha gajal . (abhey) can i join the tosha sayri .com
because i am writter to please gave me answered.
you learn it
ill and well ,rain and shine
must read the tosha gajal .
(abhey)

]]> By: Shakil Ahamed http://www.toshakishayari.com/teri-bewafai/comment-page-1#comment-1069 Shakil Ahamed Tue, 13 Oct 2009 14:04:39 +0000 http://www.toshakishayari.com/?p=817#comment-1069 ek achhi koshish may god help u ek sher likh rahahun aap se hi lekar khas aap k liye sanse uukhadati kyun hai, dgadakane kyon bikhar jati hai ye kya gubar uthata hai, aankhen kyun chhalak jati hain sadiyan gujar gaii dil ko karar kyun nahi aata ye kya hai teri bewafaii ya meri muhabbat tadpa jati hai ek achhi koshish may god help u
ek sher likh rahahun aap se hi lekar
khas aap k liye
sanse uukhadati kyun hai, dgadakane kyon bikhar jati hai
ye kya gubar uthata hai, aankhen kyun chhalak jati hain
sadiyan gujar gaii dil ko karar kyun nahi aata
ye kya hai teri bewafaii ya meri muhabbat tadpa jati hai

]]> By: OMi http://www.toshakishayari.com/teri-bewafai/comment-page-1#comment-1063 OMi Sat, 10 Oct 2009 17:28:07 +0000 http://www.toshakishayari.com/?p=817#comment-1063 bahut khoob.. Anita ji. :) bahut hii umda koshish.. aapne dard ko bayan karne k liye bahut badiya shabdo ka use kiya hai.. keep up.. :) yeh aapke liye.. <strong>क्या मचलता रहा..? कौन फिसलता रहा..? था दर्द जो सिने में आँखों से छलकता रहा हम बुत से यूह खड़े सब देखते रहे और .. टूट कर आशियाँ ज़र्रा - ज़र्रा बिखरता रहा !!</strong> bahut khoob.. Anita ji. :)
bahut hii umda koshish.. aapne dard ko bayan karne k liye
bahut badiya shabdo ka use kiya hai..

keep up.. :) yeh aapke liye..

क्या मचलता रहा..? कौन फिसलता रहा..?
था दर्द जो सिने में आँखों से छलकता रहा
हम बुत से यूह खड़े सब देखते रहे और ..
टूट कर आशियाँ ज़र्रा – ज़र्रा बिखरता रहा !!

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